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Post by CC12 35 Tue Jul 02, 2013 10:09 pm

pierce brosmans daughter is dead

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Post by Mrs Figg Tue Jul 02, 2013 10:29 pm

this is Brilliant Lance!!. dont you DARE stop now!!!! bounce bounce bounce 
crikey this is exciting. Razz I cant wait to read more.
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:17 am

Eldorion wrote:
Norc wrote:(i sense yet another love story Rolling Eyes)

You say that like it's a bad thing. Suspect

 do i, though?
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Post by Eldorion Wed Jul 03, 2013 6:28 am

Your eye-rolling smiley kinda implied that, yeah.
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Post by RA Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:16 am

This is a very good read.
Well done Lance study 

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Post by Orwell Wed Jul 03, 2013 11:16 am

Of course, if any Orwell worthy of the name knocked off a Peruvian Leader, it would have had to have been a Leftist Peruvian Leader, and so, therefore, it would not technically be an assasination, just a Necessary Obliteration (as we call it in The Trade). Sorry if I sound pedantic, Lance, but it's the principle, you see. Very Happy  {{{George Orwell, being a Lefty, would not be worthy of the name Orwell btw, that only stands to reason. Nod}}}

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Post by chris63 Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:09 pm

I,m all ears.

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Post by Tinuviel Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:59 pm

Thumbs Up fantastic!!!!!!!! I give it a royal thumbs up!

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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:22 pm

ok. i've been thinking lance, i hope u didn't think i was criticizing u when i mentioned typos and so forth. The accent thing i can apologies for, that was an ego trip, sorry, can't tell u how to write me (that would spoil the fun) and also i wasn't completely serious about that. the typo thing was just the perfectionists in me talking, i do love your stories and i just wanted to give u a hint to read through it a couple of times before sending, so that this great reading wouldn't be spoiled by silly typos. i know they're just a result of writing fast and being genius Wink no hard feelings?
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:23 pm

Eldorion wrote:Your eye-rolling smiley kinda implied that, yeah.

 pay attention to the eye-rolling smiley.. does it not smile the end? Rolling Eyes
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Post by Ally Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:41 pm

Norc wrote:
Eldorion wrote:Your eye-rolling smiley kinda implied that, yeah.

 pay attention to the eye-rolling smiley.. does it not smile the end? Rolling Eyes

Then I met you and I realized I was looking at the walking embodiment of that idea, only better and more unique.

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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:55 pm

...? okay..
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Post by Ally Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:59 pm

I thought you said you had great humour!

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Post by Eldorion Wed Jul 03, 2013 3:15 pm

Norc wrote:ok. i've been thinking lance, i hope u didn't think i was criticizing u when i mentioned typos and so forth. The accent thing i can apologies for, that was an ego trip, sorry, can't tell u how to write me (that would spoil the fun) and also i wasn't completely serious about that. the typo thing was just the perfectionists in me talking, i do love your stories and i just wanted to give u a hint to read through it a couple of times before sending, so that this great reading wouldn't be spoiled by silly typos. i know they're just a result of writing fast and being genius Wink no hard feelings?

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Post by Eldorion Wed Jul 03, 2013 3:16 pm

Norc wrote: pay attention to the eye-rolling smiley.. does it not smile the end? Rolling Eyes

...no one uses eye-rolling smileys like that, either here or elsewhere.

Spoiler:
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Post by Lancebloke Wed Jul 03, 2013 3:20 pm

No offence taken norclet. I am writing as I think and then just posting. Not like my actual book I am writing where I am currently in major editing mode.

Any errors here will kinda need to just be accepted. Any proper mistakes like wrong people being in wrong places... I will try and minimise so please let me know if you see any.
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 4:27 pm

ok, good to know Lance, cus i really didn't mean anything grumpy about it ^^ it's just me who's a perfectionist Razz whenever i post something needlehole i akways go through it two-three times to edit typos and etc.. Rolling Eyes i'll try to overlook them, your story is great so it'll be easy Very Happy
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 4:29 pm

Eldorion wrote:
Norc wrote: pay attention to the eye-rolling smiley.. does it not smile the end? Rolling Eyes

...no one uses eye-rolling smileys like that, either here or elsewhere.

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 erm... yes Rolling Eyes i kinda don't find the english word of it but it portays the perfect emotion.. of.. erm.. as i said.. can't find the word, but it's not a sour one, it's a more like.. eeerm.... 

what the hell do u use it for?
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 4:31 pm

Eldorion wrote:
Norc wrote:ok. i've been thinking lance, i hope u didn't think i was criticizing u when i mentioned typos and so forth. The accent thing i can apologies for, that was an ego trip, sorry, can't tell u how to write me (that would spoil the fun) and also i wasn't completely serious about that. the typo thing was just the perfectionists in me talking, i do love your stories and i just wanted to give u a hint to read through it a couple of times before sending, so that this great reading wouldn't be spoiled by silly typos. i know they're just a result of writing fast and being genius Wink no hard feelings?

Who are you and what did you do with Norc? Shocked

erm.. that's me. when i have to make sure people don't get me wrong Wink don't wanna come of as rude and impolite just because i joke and tease all the time Wink
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Post by Eldorion Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:03 pm

Norc wrote:erm.. that's me. when i have to make sure people don't get me wrong Wink don't wanna come of as rude and impolite just because i joke and tease all the time Wink

Suspect
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Post by Eldorion Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:04 pm

Norc wrote: erm... yes Rolling Eyes i kinda don't find the english word of it but it portays the perfect emotion.. of.. erm.. as i said.. can't find the word, but it's not a sour one, it's a more like.. eeerm.... 

what the hell do u use it for?

Mockery and dismissiveness.
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:09 pm

nope. mockery yes.. but with a hint of teasing and love behind it..
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:09 pm

see the smile --> Rolling Eyes
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Post by Eldorion Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:49 pm

Norc wrote:nope. mockery yes.. but with a hint of teasing and love behind it..

Aaw, you just can't keep your love for me under wraps anymore, can you? I love you
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Post by Norc Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:58 pm

it's just too good to be true.. i can't take my eyes off of you... you're like heaven to touch... and i wanna hold u so much.. it's just too good to be true.. i can't take my eyes off of you... darraaa darrraa darrararaaappapapdaaaar...

*hums ridiculous shampoo commercial song*
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